Scienic the Fox Meterax

Subject: Scienic the Fox Meterax Sat Sep 11, 2010 10:21 am

Name: Sceinic the Fox Meterax
Gender: Female
Species: Fox/ Meterax
Age: 16
Birthday: 10/ 29
Appearance: A purple fox with emerald green eyes, a brown t-shirt and boots, blue jeans, an opal necklace, and a ponytail.
Side: Good
Personality: Happy go-lucky, as they say, but also pretty stubborn.
Family: Meterax, Adopted Family: Mum, Pa, and James
Likes: Swimming, Hanging with friends, joking around
Dislikes: Unneeded violence, killing.
Friends: Rhys, Moriah, Lime, Zet
Best Friends: Glace, Skink
Crush/BF: Axiom
Crush on her: Axiom
Enemies: Meterax, Cain & Vain
Weapon of Choice: Ice Dagger, and powers
Vehicle of Choice: None
Powers: Ice and the occasional Dark
Strengths: Can easily outwit her enemies, and is able to do long distance attacks.
Weaknesses: Isn't very fast, and sometimes she cannot control her anger.
Goals: none at the time
Theme Song: Bones Shatter by Hedley
General: https://fandedication.4umer.com/fan-fiction-f2/sceinic-s-backstory-t186.htm#2974
Authors notes: Sceinic's backstory will be updated as I write it.

Subject: Re: Scienic the Fox Meterax Sun Sep 12, 2010 2:35 am

A little more description, and less jokes in the profile would probably help here. If she's related to the Metarex, there has to be SOME story behind that. In fact, it's impossible that there wouldn't be a story behind it.

Subject: Re: Scienic the Fox Meterax Tue Sep 14, 2010 5:18 pm

...
The materax are those....people right
....from the sonic show
from that station
....
When I first saw it I thought it was something from the Matrix
AHEM
What Smash Said .x.
For some reason when I read Character Profiles with Jokes in it
I feel like the person that made it was responding to it more like a Q&A or Meme and less like a Bio .x.
But yes more meat would be good =D
And interesting
And Seasoning on the top
With some secret ingredient that makes them really stand out
...like....Caesar dressing with spicy croutons ...I love croutons on my salad....
.....ffff I need to stop comparing character bios to foodItsMakingMeHungry ;;

Subject: Re: Scienic the Fox Meterax Wed Sep 15, 2010 2:34 am

Novastar wrote:: ...
What Smash Said .x.
For some reason when I read Character Profiles with Jokes in it
I feel like the person that made it was responding to it more like a Q&A or Meme and less like a Bio .x.

Yes, the metarex were from the last season of Sonic X. And yes, I feel that way too. It doesn't make it look serious enough.

Subject: Re: Scienic the Fox Meterax Wed Sep 15, 2010 3:34 pm

Honestly, I've been too tired lately to put much spice in it. This weekend I'll work more.

Subject: Re: Scienic the Fox Meterax Thu Sep 16, 2010 8:49 am

Well that's fine. No rush really.

Subject: Re: Scienic the Fox Meterax Sat Sep 18, 2010 6:57 am

Better?

Subject: Re: Scienic the Fox Meterax Sat Sep 18, 2010 11:06 am

Yes, it is better. Although I do have General and Back Story as two different things.

Subject: Re: Scienic the Fox Meterax Sat Sep 18, 2010 11:20 am

Oh..... Well what's general?

Subject: Re: Scienic the Fox Meterax Sun Sep 19, 2010 8:36 am

General is where you put the general info on the character, aside from their history. Such as where they live, what they do in current times, possible hobbies, how they are affected by people and things around them, or vice versa. Stuff like that.

Take Smash's newest profile for example.